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Truth be told...life on the high seas was boring.

Nothing interested Captain Antonio Fernandez Carriedo any longer. His fleets had suffered much damage against that...he even detested to say the word, English pirate, and it seemed to be just one mission after another.

He had missed home. The warm sun, the gentle breeze, the tomato fields. Those idyllic times before he had joined his nation's Navy. His wanderlust had been more than quenched, and even though he was going home, he wasn't all too happy. He knew that in a few days, he would have to be back on the waters again.

This meaningless...drivel was insane. There seemed to be nothing to look forward to, nothing-

BOOM!

Followed by many crashing noises, and other strange cries and noises, it dawned on Antonio that his ship was under siege.
And the fact that his crew was extremely unprepared was like a blow right in the solar plexus for him. They carried no riches; the crew consisted mostly of lackeys who would just help around in the overseas posts.

Antonio almost watched, dumb-founded, as his galleon was being raided, but what caught him even more by surprise was when he felt a cold hilt near his throat. His assailant quickly stepped out from behind him, to face him, the dagger never leaving his throat.

A flash of their bright orbs, a swish of curls tied firmly back…
…was his assailant really a girl?

"Hand over all your riches." There was no doubt in his mind – this was definitely a woman, even if she did try to cover up her voice by making it gruff.
Green orbs meeting [eye colour] ones, a slow smile spread across Antonio's face. "I never expected the high seas to be a suitable place for a woman, but you seem to fit in beautifully."
"S-Shut up!" She retorted, her voice noticeably higher.
Everything about her enticed Antonio, her feisty demeanour, her spunk...he cursed the moonless night for not being able to see her features better.
"Piracy shouldn't be a professionfor someone as beautiful as you, cariño."
"That's none of your business." She wasn't even trying to disguise her voice any longer – a bold move.
"I will find you, you know." He leant in to whisper. He could hear her gulping, and before she could react, he quickly pressed his lips to her.
Gasping, [Name] took a step back. She quickly ordered her men to leave the ship with whatever they could gather.

How dare that Captain even...
She wouldn't deny that she enjoyed it, though.

Antonio watched his assailant, the beautiful pirate that had stolen his meagre loot as well as his heart. He would trace her down as soon as he got to port, then sail after her.
He definitely had something to look forward to, now.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~  ~*~   ~*~  
This could be all that I've waited for
And this could be everything
I don't wanna dream anymore
Well, I guess it'd be wrong for me to call him a pirate, because he's not. You, Reader-chan, are, though.
He's just a captain.
OKay, so this is dedicated to the awesome (no joke, there) ~ShiningMidnightStar
Because she's about to start a Pirate!Spain fic (which I can't wait for) and Spain might be her favourite character.
And my mind's saying that Germany and I and Spain and her should so go on a double date in our fictional world, because Germany happens to be her second favourite, and Spain mine.
*slaps imaginary self for blabbing*

Song - Weightless - All Time Low (I was gonna make it a Prussia one, but...ah well.)
For this challenge -> [link]
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sakunae Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sequel pls? Anything to follow this. ANYTHING AT ALL. Have I mentioned I love Spain?
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll try!
Me too xD
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sakunae Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ We both love Spain, but since I adore you and you're writing, I won't kill you or maim you ir harm you in any way like I did to the last chic....
S.:Russia is a bad influence on you...
I WAS LIKE THIS BEFORE I MET RUSSIA!
S.: But he makes it worse...
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
BWAHAHA, oh Russia, I'm not afraid of him. I just like to pet him once in a while
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sakunae Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Russia and I often go on 'fun walks' with various weapons~ Or we stalk people~
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izfish Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't this insert name? I would never hurt Spain!!! He's so awesome!!! But this thing still is. Bwahahahahhaha! I can now tell my mortal enemy that England was the pirate, not Spain....
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I wasn't sure as to whether I wanted this to be a reader-insert or not, but I went with it at the last minute :XD:
Reader-chan doesn't hurt Spain, anyhow :P
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011
This
Is
SO COOL!

I must go read the fic now! xD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, yes, deffo go to her page!! She's got the first chapter up!!!
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
I HAS READ IT.
Bad move antonio
Bad move INDEED.
XD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:XD:
Cause now you got a badass pirata chick after you!!
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
Lol yush!
Who could've killed you a moment ago... XD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
But, hey! He's Antonio!
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harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
True true~!
Cuz he's just that badass~!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Duh.
He's part of the Bad Touch Trio.
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Writer
:D I am so putting this in the description of the first chapter of mine... :D I love it! It actually kinda describes the first chapter of the Pirate!Spain fanfiction (... I still have no name for it)
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're a name expert, so it won't be a problem :XD:
Well, I'm glad you do! Because you're the inspiration for it :P So, if you like it, it's all good!!!
And I still can't wait for that!!
And Spain really does want to go on a date with you
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Writer
Well, Spain's ship is named The Morning Star, so I am considering either that being the name of it or Pirata, the name for pirate in Spanish. XD

Spain wants to whaaaaaa-?!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Either one's good, but Pirata's got quite an edgy feel to it :D

Yes...that's what happens when I'm awake late at night drinking stuff I shouldn't be :| It's a quadraple date now, with ~Emurelle and China, I'm dragging Kirkie there for Rosie, Spain really wants to get a chance to talk to your more and I'm using chloroform to drag Luddy there
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Writer
PIRATA IT IS! PROLOGUE FINISHED!

......... BAD GIRL ALLI! But this oughta be fun!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
AND I JUST READ IT
:faint:

:XD: Blame the Spaniards and good sangria :XD: But, fun, yes!!!
...so...how do I chloroform Ludwig, again?
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student Writer
And now I just thought of Stepbrothers and the song they wing while their on the boat-

The Nina!
Oh!
The Pinta!
Oh!
The Santa Maria!
Oh!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lolwhut? *is completely lost*
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synthelle Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist
At first I thought this was Pirate fem!England x Spain. "ORZ
Antonio's just a captain? Not merchant captain or something? Spanish ships that were raided back then were mostly merchant ships.

This fic is Spain approved! :iconspainapprovedplz:
Prussia does not approve though. Y U NO MAKE PRUSSIA ONE? *bricked
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Somehow....I've never thought of Fem!England as a pirate...*mind is opening up*
Well...I guess he can be a merchant captain. :D At that time at night, I'm so not 100% focused OTL
Yay~ Thank you so much!

I've written Prussia ones before, but never Pirate!Prussia *can hear the gears creaking*
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Sekkra-chan96 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student
Awesome fic! Loved it :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :D
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Sekkra-chan96 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student
No problem! ^^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Sekkra-chan96 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student
:hug:
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Theatrikatisha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This concept is beautiful. You may want to just refine some of your grammar and syntax though, a few of the sentences here don't make perfect sense and could be thought through a little more. This is going to be a fantastic story.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks so much!
I guess I'm just not meant to write in the middle of the night OTL.
But, thanks all the same! I'll be working on that!!
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GoldenGirl954 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011
Awesome fanfic :D Go Pirate Spain!
Is anyone getting a POTC 4 vibe here?
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
YAY FOR CAPTAINS and hot ones too
I...actually haven't watched the film yet. And I so badly want to.
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RosieMagic Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Ugra, Name, I told you about piratecy! Only steal the loot! Now you got a hot Spainard chasing after you! o-o
Once again, great job!

I expect you to tell me everything that happens on that double date! ^u^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Not that she minds, you know... I wouldn't

Well...it'll be a triple date if I manage to drag England and you there. *shrug*
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RosieMagic Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Student General Artist
I really doubt anyone would mind, me included

Pfff, a triple date? It sounds lik this is going to start becoming completely ridiculous. *grabs England by the arm* We're so there :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed

Yes. Add in to the madness I have the urge to write about this
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RosieMagic Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Indeed. As well.

The madness of Wonderland? *shot* if you do so, I love you forever! I mean, I already love you forever. But I'll totally draw something for you if write about this
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconisayplz: *sips tea*

YES. WONDERLAND WOULD PALE IN COMPARISON.
Guess what I'll be doing tomorrow :'D
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RosieMagic Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconyousayplz: *eats a biscuit*

Ohmygosh, really? *hug* I love you forever! What would you like me to draw for you in return?
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconwesayplz: *passes over tea cake*

LAKSFLAKJFLAKJF YOU DON'T HAVE TO DRAW ANYTHING REALLY! YOU'RE SO BUSY ANYWAY!! but if you'd want to, just surprise me OuO...and not before I've finished the fic, either. That's just be unfair...
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Yarj Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's fantawesome! :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! :hug:
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"And my mind's saying that Germany and I and Spain and her should so go on a double date in our fictional world, because Germany happens to be her second favourite, and Spain mine."
Can I come along so I can glomp Yao? XD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well...~RosieRed is gonna be there once I manage to drag England there...so, if Yao's there, gladly join us!!
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Sure! owo
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:XD:
Gonna be fun!!
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I bet!
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WarnaWolf Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...I may or may not have squealed :|.

hehe<3.
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