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Truth be on the high seas was boring.

Nothing interested Captain Antonio Fernandez Carriedo any longer. His fleets had suffered much damage against that...he even detested to say the word, English pirate, and it seemed to be just one mission after another.

He had missed home. The warm sun, the gentle breeze, the tomato fields. Those idyllic times before he had joined his nation's Navy. His wanderlust had been more than quenched, and even though he was going home, he wasn't all too happy. He knew that in a few days, he would have to be back on the waters again.

This meaningless...drivel was insane. There seemed to be nothing to look forward to, nothing-


Followed by many crashing noises, and other strange cries and noises, it dawned on Antonio that his ship was under siege.
And the fact that his crew was extremely unprepared was like a blow right in the solar plexus for him. They carried no riches; the crew consisted mostly of lackeys who would just help around in the overseas posts.

Antonio almost watched, dumb-founded, as his galleon was being raided, but what caught him even more by surprise was when he felt a cold hilt near his throat. His assailant quickly stepped out from behind him, to face him, the dagger never leaving his throat.

A flash of their bright orbs, a swish of curls tied firmly back…
…was his assailant really a girl?

"Hand over all your riches." There was no doubt in his mind – this was definitely a woman, even if she did try to cover up her voice by making it gruff.
Green orbs meeting [eye colour] ones, a slow smile spread across Antonio's face. "I never expected the high seas to be a suitable place for a woman, but you seem to fit in beautifully."
"S-Shut up!" She retorted, her voice noticeably higher.
Everything about her enticed Antonio, her feisty demeanour, her spunk...he cursed the moonless night for not being able to see her features better.
"Piracy shouldn't be a professionfor someone as beautiful as you, cariño."
"That's none of your business." She wasn't even trying to disguise her voice any longer – a bold move.
"I will find you, you know." He leant in to whisper. He could hear her gulping, and before she could react, he quickly pressed his lips to her.
Gasping, [Name] took a step back. She quickly ordered her men to leave the ship with whatever they could gather.

How dare that Captain even...
She wouldn't deny that she enjoyed it, though.

Antonio watched his assailant, the beautiful pirate that had stolen his meagre loot as well as his heart. He would trace her down as soon as he got to port, then sail after her.
He definitely had something to look forward to, now.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~  ~*~   ~*~  
This could be all that I've waited for
And this could be everything
I don't wanna dream anymore
Well, I guess it'd be wrong for me to call him a pirate, because he's not. You, Reader-chan, are, though.
He's just a captain.
OKay, so this is dedicated to the awesome (no joke, there) ~ShiningMidnightStar
Because she's about to start a Pirate!Spain fic (which I can't wait for) and Spain might be her favourite character.
And my mind's saying that Germany and I and Spain and her should so go on a double date in our fictional world, because Germany happens to be her second favourite, and Spain mine.
*slaps imaginary self for blabbing*

Song - Weightless - All Time Low (I was gonna make it a Prussia one, but...ah well.)
For this challenge -> [link]
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sakunae Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sequel pls? Anything to follow this. ANYTHING AT ALL. Have I mentioned I love Spain?
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll try!
Me too xD
sakunae Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ We both love Spain, but since I adore you and you're writing, I won't kill you or maim you ir harm you in any way like I did to the last chic....
S.:Russia is a bad influence on you...
S.: But he makes it worse...
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
BWAHAHA, oh Russia, I'm not afraid of him. I just like to pet him once in a while
sakunae Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Russia and I often go on 'fun walks' with various weapons~ Or we stalk people~
izfish Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't this insert name? I would never hurt Spain!!! He's so awesome!!! But this thing still is. Bwahahahahhaha! I can now tell my mortal enemy that England was the pirate, not Spain....
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I wasn't sure as to whether I wanted this to be a reader-insert or not, but I went with it at the last minute :XD:
Reader-chan doesn't hurt Spain, anyhow :P
harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011

I must go read the fic now! xD
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, yes, deffo go to her page!! She's got the first chapter up!!!
harleybot Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
Bad move antonio
Bad move INDEED.
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