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Gilbert turned around with a frown on his face, hearing his name, yet the expression on his face softened slightly, when he saw you waving towards him. You broke off from Emma's grip, and made your way towards Gilbert.

"Hey, Gil." You said, exhaling.
"Using me as the excuse, are you?" he chuckled.
"W-What?"
"Emma's one of the most popular girls in the school. What's your problem?"
"Oh," You huffed, understanding what he was talking about. "Dude, she's fucking creepy! She's so clingy!"
Gilbert looked at you, for a moment, and then burst out laughing. "C-Clingy?"
"She was clinging to my arm! Didn't you see?" You cried in protest.
"I'd bet that 75% of the school would kill to be in your position."
"Fuck no." You grimaced. "I hate my position..." Suddenly, an afterthought struck you, and before you realised, you had already blurted it out.
"You're not part of that 75%, are you?"
Gilbert looked at you, curiously, forcing you to stare at the ground, as you two walked together. "I-I didn't mean-"
"Nein." He replied, after a while, "Emma's not my type of girl."
You laughed. "Gilbert Beilschmidt has a type?"
"My reputation precedes me again, doesn't it?" He sighed in mock vain, making you laughed even more.
"Well...yeah. I've heard that you just kinda hook up with any girl with a decent rack and ass." For some reason, you didn't feel shy – not in the least. Maybe Gilbert and you were developing a closer relationship. Or maybe you were just getting used to being a boy.

"Not true." He replied, tersely. "There is a certain type-"
"Sure."
"What, you think I'm just lying?"
"Don't ask me!"
"I'm not asking you – I'm telling you!"
"From what I've heard-"
"From what you've heard" Gilbert scoffed. "You probably think I'm an idiot."
"Which isn't all that false." You replied, with a smile, but he just continued to speak.
"She's gotta be smart, nice, friendly, and gorgeous."
It sort of hit you like a blow to the stomach. With the exception of the first, and that too only in comparison to Antonio and Francis, maybe, you really couldn't see yourself being any of the rest. Oh, maybe kind, as well. Kinder than the Bad Touch Trio, for sure.
Forcing a strained laugh, you commented "Everything that you're not, huh?"
"Hey!" He protested, yet there was a laugh in his voice. "I'm all that, AND awesome!" After a pause, though, he added. "Nein, you're right, though, but dare you tell anyone this, or else-"
"My lips are sealed." You smiled, yet the smile didn't reach your eyes.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   

You weren't surprised to find your front door unlocked, but you were more than surprised to find Melanie along with Francis sitting on your sofa.
"What the fu-" You began to exclaim, but Melanie silenced you, with a hug.
"Oh, [Name]! I'm kinda happy you came back, early!"
"[N-Name]?" You stuttered out, glancing at Francis. "Why're you calling me by my cousin's name?"
"T'en fais pas, I know what has happened." He replied, a small smile on his face.
"Wait, you TOLD him?" You spluttered, trying out of Melanie's grip.

When she finally stepped back, she had the biggest smile on her face. "Dude, Gilbert has a massive crush on you! Seriously!"
"How do you even know all of this?" You frowned, more than displeased at the sudden turn of events.
"Francis told me, of course!" She laughed, making you turn your frown towards him.
"Oui, it is true, mon am...ah, chère [Name]. Gilbert really is serious about you.

Conflicting feelings coursed through you. On one hand, you could believe Francis and Melanie, and strangely, you did want to trust Francis, even, yet...your more critical mind kicked in, telling you that there was no way in hell that this would work out. As hot, angry tears pricked your eyes, your rushed to your bedroom, wordlessly, and slammed the door shut.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   

"Is she all right, Melanie?"
"I think it's just PMS."
"Mais...she is a man, no? Then how could-"
"It doesn't matter."
Francis decided to not pursue the matter any further.
Some bonding time with Gilbert, and drama.
Guys, I have a weird idea for a Germany series :|

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109144 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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ELR93 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i was just wondering what about the reader's parents?? wouldnt they wonder where she is and y there was a guy there instead of her??
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furchild1204 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Melanie... :iconkillitplz: you have 3 seconds to run.
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NyanCat001 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You weren't surprised to find your front door unlocked, but you were more than surprised to find Melanie along with Francis sitting on your sofa.
"What the fu-" You began to exclaim, but Melanie silenced you, with a hug.
"Oh, [Name]! I'm kinda happy you came back, early!"
"[N-Name]?" You stuttered out, glancing at Francis. "Why're you calling me by my cousin's name?"
"T'en fais pas, I know what has happened." He replied, a small smile on his face.
"Wait, you TOLD him?" You spluttered, trying out of Melanie's grip.

Me: :iconstunplz:WHAT THE FUCK, MELANIE?!?!? I'LL KILL YOU-!!

When she finally stepped back, she had the biggest smile on her face. "Dude, Gilbert has a massive crush on you! Seriously!"
"How do you even know all of this?" You frowned, more than displeased at the sudden turn of events.
"Francis told me, of course!" She laughed, making you turn your frown towards him.
"Oui, it is true, mon am...ah, chère [Name]. Gilbert really is serious about you.

Me: :iconangryplz:EVEN IF HE HAS A CRUSH ON ME, THAT STILL DOESN'T FIX THE FACT THAT YOU TOLD A SECRET THAT WAS MEANT TO BE KEPT!! SO-!!:iconfrageplz:

Conflicting feelings coursed through you. On one hand, you could believe Francis and Melanie, and strangely, you did want to trust Francis, even, yet...your more critical mind kicked in, telling you that there was no way in hell that this would work out. As hot, angry tears pricked your eyes, your rushed to your bedroom, wordlessly, and slammed the door shut.

Me::iconrunrunrunplz::iconrunbitchrunplz:
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numbers3 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
you then raged,throwing everything across the room and flipping tables. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRGH!!!!!!!!" an inhuman roar left your mouth. Titan-21 [V2] 
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KindOfGoth Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconiggybrowsplz:
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I would never trust na friend if she told secrets like that
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grimtales1lizzybird Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I forget wut PMS means :meow:
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goodlucklight Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm manPMSing .-. ....
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chibiGaaLee Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't want to turn into a girl agaiin! *cryes*
BTW I can't find nex chapter .----.
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The-Panda-Bread Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why can I not find chapter 1?!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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reddestruction45 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD PMS
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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flickawhite Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What's your idea...? :iconiggybrowsplz:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that was the other series going on, Ten Steps :'D
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flickawhite Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I see.... :iconsingplz: la~~ la~~ Gonna go check it out~~! :iconsingplz:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I'd be honoured :'D
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flickawhite Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
And... I watched because I love the way you write! :D You are (as a certain Prussian would say) awesome...!!! C:
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist
Francis, nothing can be hidden away from you! XD
"You probably think I'm an idiot."
"Which isn't all that false." :D Haha! I love this story!:heart:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HAHA! I love your dialogues! :D
Thanks so much, love!
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist
But I couldn't write any of them without your stories! XD
And you're welcome! :love:
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jade-whisper Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What's the weird idea? :iconilikeitplz:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I've started it :D It's called Ten Steps :D
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jade-whisper Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice~ I'll have to check into that sometime.
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anime327 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
dude!!! dis made me blush n laughed!!! (man period?? is dat real~?) xDDDDDD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks! :D
(LOL, I HOPE NOT!)
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anime327 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
ur welcome n i hope so cuz i would fall on ta floor laughin at them xDDD
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OuranRULES Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
O.O This is epic.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Uwahh, thanks so much, Geety!
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GElric731 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Student Writer
:iconyaaayplz: This story is so interesting and well written. XD To be honest, I usually don't read reader-insert series, but THIS. :omfg: :squee: Me gusta.

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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyaayplz: <--- That reminds me of L, Light and Misa OTL

ALSKFJALKJFLJ R-REALLY? THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
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GElric731 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Student Writer
:iconmother-of-godplz: I never noticed that until now. xD *Will never look at that PLZ the same way again*

:D You're welcome~
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ShortieFish Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
...man period?
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's..legit. Now
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ShortieFish Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...

I knew it
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vampsandghosts Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
I am excite for the next story!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
alfalkfj Thanks so much :'D
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ErinChan01 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my Gawd! :icongrin--plz: This is so awesome, can't wait for the next chapter :meow: :heart:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Uwahh! Thanks so much!!
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LeGasolineSunset Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
YAY MORE.
I swear, I am living on this right now.
It's so awesome~ <3
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LAKJFLAKGJ
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I'm so, SO honoured!
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SakuraTaisen12 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist
LOL "I think it's just PMS..."
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, she's Mel, after all!!
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SakuraTaisen12 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist
XD so true but you have to love her.
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MiniYouko Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
X3 <3333
Mooooore!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:squee:
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mikuruchan20210 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Want to be a fucking girl!!!!!!! NOW GOD DAMMIT (South Italian)
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LMAO!
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