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"[Name], can you do this? Sh-"
"Don't swear!" You whispered harshly, cutting off Gilbert with a quick kiss, as you slipped in through your bedroom window.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   

The next day, Gilbert waited for [Name] at the usual spot – the bus stop down the road. But, she was late – by fifteen minutes. His finger hovered over the green key of his cell phone. He wasn't quite sure whether he should call her, or not. Would her dad-
"Gilbert!" he turned around, to see [Name] standing behind him, taking deep breaths in order to gain her breath back. "Last night...Dad...down by the lake...saw-"
"Shit!" Gilbert exclaimed. "What was he doing there? How'd he see us?"
You shook your head. "H-He said that..." You gulped, as you forced the words to come out of your throat. "We can't meet, Gilbert."
"Was...? It wasn't often that Gilbert reverted to his mother tongue, but dire circumstances called for them – like when you called him by his whole name.
"You looked at him, wide-eyed, as you tried to fight back the tears. "B-but I told him."
Gilbert waited in silence, for you to continue.

"I told him...that I loved you, and I'd do anything for you." You stared down at the floor, biting your lip. Your mind was conflicted over the issue, still. You had declared that you loved the proverbial "bad boy" – the one that Dad never approved of. But would it all come to waste? What if Gilbert had been using you as just a fling? With conflicting emotion, you had come up to him, to tell him what had happened this morning. Even though you had told yourself that even if Gilbert had told you that it was foolish of you, and that you were indeed a fling to him, that you could bounce right back, but the surmounting nervousness in you said otherwise.

However, you weren't really expecting to be crushed in the Prussian's sudden embrace.
"You don't have to prove anything to me, babe." He muttered through your hair, as you clung onto him.
There was so much you could've told him, but, instead, you just chose to let your tears spill on his sweatshirt. Wordlessly, his arms held you tighter, and he rested his chin on your head, bringing both of you closer in the sharp winter morning's breeze.

Gilbert wasn't sure what else he could say, really. He'd never been shown much affection, and apart from his brother, no one else had ever really done anything for him. He believed in the saying "To each his own", but all that had changed with the girl in his arms. Unconditional love had been new to Gilbert, but he was getting the hang of it...slowly.

"We're better off when Daddy's not around, anyway." He half joked, and you punched his arm, lightly.


Oh baby you got nothing to prove
But if we decide to go doesnt mean he's gotta know
Oh baby you got nothing to lose
And we're better off when daddys not around.
Clearly McFLY songs bring the inner sap of me out.
I love them to bits, anyway.
I own nothing. The song is one of my favourites, for the whole 60's, Beach Boys influence :P
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:iconroserianne:
RoseRianne Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
omgg xD cant stop reading and listening to mcfly <3
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay :D I love them!
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Anniethehedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
My dad would be like "As long as you don't get pregnant, don't get put in jail and he treats you right- I could care less who you're with" and I'd be like " The hell...?" <-- doesn't have a boyfriend/crush
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Let. Us. Swap. Dads.
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Anniethehedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Or you could live with me. XD I love my dad too much to swap, but I'd gladly share. X3
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mikuruchan20210 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Makes me cry... *favs*
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
D-Don't cry D:
Thanks so much, though!
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mikuruchan20210 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You have made me a prussia fan now!!!!
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:iconyukinataangel:
YukinataAngel Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
WONDEFUL!!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Danke!
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YukinataAngel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
You're Welcome
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:icondezie34:
Dezie34 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
VERY lovely m'dear!!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Grazie!
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Deaththe-Kid-Fangirl Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw now if I had a dad. I have a step-dad that I hate though. :iconsmileyplz: That's cool though.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, well, I'm sorry :|
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:icondeaththe-kid-fangirl:
Deaththe-Kid-Fangirl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw it's okay I really stopped caring much about it. LOL
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pandatama Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh wow. My Doitsu-fangirlness suddenly doesn't seem all that solid.
... There was so much feeling here, I don't know where to start... Maybe I could just say I absolutely loved it? ; 3 ; I actually felt like I was there, I could totally see everything happening like a movie in my mind; you did a great job in conveying the atmosphere and the emotions.
And also, that song. ♥ ♥ ♥
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconrlytearplz:
I-I'm glad you like it so much! Thank you so, SO much!
I'm glad you like the song, too!!
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pandatama Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw, you're welcome, silly, you know I adore your writing <3
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist
Poor girl! Loved the ending!! XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LAKJFAKJG
Thank you!!!
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violentluck Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Writer
:hooray: I think this gave me a cavity....It was so worth it!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lkajslgkajsflgkjf
Cavity no good
But I'm glad you liked it! :heart:
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violentluck Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student Writer
Indeed! You're welcome and the cavity is expected when all I do is read Reader Inserts.
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HeReIaMRaMbLiNgAgAin Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:iconiloveitplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconluvluvplz:
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Cali-got-Swagg Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love McFLY!<3 great story !!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
KJFALKGJLDKGJ
I LOVE THEM, TOO!!!
:iconluvluvplz:
Thanks so much!!
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Cali-got-Swagg Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D of course~
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animefan5228 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
aww thats cute
people need to write more prussia reader inserts
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
They do, don't they?
Thanks so much!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
awwz so sweet! ^^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lakjfalkdjg
Grazie!
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AlphonseElric92 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
^^ no problem
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconiloveitplz:
and here i thought i'd finally gotten over my crazy Prussia crush... xD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's Prussia. Seriously :}
:XD:
JK, thanks so much!!
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
i love how your stories are all so epic, but you don't have to put in tonnes of detail to make them that great. you're a super writer :3
Prussia would be proud of how awesome you are
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWH *killed with cuteness*
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
NEIN NEIN NEIN *revives*
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*lives again*

Yay :iconmegustaplz:
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Fairy-anime Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Why is my dad so like this? .A.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, mine too .________________.
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ivydragonette Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
(~TT^TT)~ Daaaaaad, why you gotta be...
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
IKR?
*sniff*
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ivydragonette Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
My dad might just be the same though. More or less.
"boyfriend? gtfo!"
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kemonekko123 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awe~
and lol

My Real daddy will never say that xD He would be with a Rifle and be target practice. Just to say *Tsh, chk* "Ready To meet the boy~" xD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LMAO
Your dad's cool and scary at the same time!
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kemonekko123 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD! Yes he is~ My mom will put any boy to cook.
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K1ZUKI Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Student General Artist
good lord, my dad wouldn't do that but my MOM would -face palm-
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kemonekko123 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xD!
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