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"It's a simple question – did you invite him or not?" Daniel seemed slightly annoyed, which brought a small smile to your face.
"I kept an open invitation, love." You turned towards him, after you put in your last earring, a smile on your face. "But I'd be surprised if he did show up."
Daniel walked up towards you, and hugged you quickly. "I'm so happy I've got you, [Name]. Together, we'd be the most perfect couple in this town – all my friends would be jealous of me, and all your friends would be jealous of you!" His laugh was soft, yet chilling, and you could vaguely feel your grip tightening on his shirt.

Kissing him on the cheek quickly, you pulled back.
"Let me finish getting dressed, Daniel," You said, softly.
"Mmm...I'd rather think about getting you undressed," Daniel's lips hovered near your ear, as he whispered softly, yet the low baritone of his voice sent shudders down your spine.
Teasingly, you pushed him away. "I don't want us to be late, Dan."
With a playful pout on his face, he made his way towards the door. "Don't be late for me, doll."

Your smile vanished, as soon as he closed the door. A doll? Was that all you were to him? A doll? A showpiece? All his affection towards you was, in the long run, just another way for him to glorify himself - Daniel could never look past anyone but himself, could he?

The last item of jewellery you wore was a ring – it was a vintage beauty, something which you'd actually found in a vintage store. But what intrigued you most about it was the little compartment that the ring concealed. Oh, this was going to be dramatic, all right, but after all, this was a plan to discreetly poison your fiancé, wasn't it?



Your eyes widened slightly, as you saw Nikolai enter the grand hall. You couldn't move your gaze off him, though – he was just dressed...so...differently - a black formal suit with a dark blue satin shirt. You'd never seen him dressed like that before...not that you were complaining.

Excusing yourself from the group mindlessly blabbering away around you, you made your way towards the dark figure looming near the door. Only to have a hand placed on your shoulder. Turning backwards, you saw Daniel, his mouth set in a firm line, and his emerald gaze steely towards the now-faintly-smirking Nikolai, near the entrance.

"Hold my drink, [Name], I'll be right back," and without another word, you were left standing in the middle of a hall with Daniel's drink in your hand.

Nikolai's smile grew even wider, as he realised that you had the most perfect opportunity right now, to slip in the poison. You realised it as well.

A myriad of thoughts passed through your mind, as you held the drink. If you did manage to poison Daniel, how would you get away with it? Actually, it probably wouldn't be too difficult: act as the grief-stricken, deranged fiancée, disappear from the face of the earth with grief, escape, go to another country, get a new identity and start a new life with Nikolai.

It wouldn't be so difficult.

But...would it be worth it? All of this, just to end up with Nikolai? Someone who you had broken up with so messily?

What do you do?

*Put the poison in the drink.
*Put the drink down.
Yay for options~
Yes, you can choose your ending, however, the endings have not been written, yet! I don't want to upload one after the other, so there might be a wait of a day or two!

Thanks so much, lovely readers, for all the support! And remember...choose wisely!

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:iconamliajane12345:
amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student General Artist
I don't know who to chose *squirming* 
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
I'll read both of them XD
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eeveeon22 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Not enough Male!Hungarys. Readers'll put it down.
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:iconmildlyme:
MildlyMe Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, what the heck, I'll add one more body to the pile! >:)
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL :D
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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SeraphimSkye Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
I'm gonna put it d-

No I'm putting it in the drink. >D Die Daniel Die! :evillaugh:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gahaha
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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SeraphimSkye Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
I did~! They were really good! I especially liked the one where I picked neither guy. I dont know that one I just wasn't expecting that and I really like things that I don't expect.

It was awesome ;)
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:iconouranrules:
OuranRULES Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
....Poison :3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Geety. Oh you.
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:iconouranrules:
OuranRULES Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
:iconohmeplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconohusplz:
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bunnyprincess1 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Poison both of them and run away to Paris to marry France
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL xD
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:iconbunnyprincess1:
bunnyprincess1 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
:P
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:iconskully-chan:
skully-chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
POISON. I'd rather be dating a crazy killer then bein' a damned trophey wife.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=w=b
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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shroka-knight Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Poison the drink.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Even if it's wrong POISON DANIEL, RUN AWAY WITH NIKOLAI AND START A NEW LIFE!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh my~
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I liked it!

Thanks doing the story, I enjoyed it :3
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elphieofkiamoko Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.e Eh........ Put the drink down and run away. xDD;;; Neither of them are right, you know?
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL xD
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the-angry-blob Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
POISON ALL OF THE THINGS!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Pfft xD
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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FoxyShadow13 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Poison I guess xD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
Well, I hope you liked the endings!
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
I choose no poison.
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StarlightCove Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
POISON!
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:iconixiamaya-natsukiixi:
IXIAmaya-NatsukiIXI Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Decisions Decisions....
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Randomkid122 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Poison poison poison poison PLEASE!
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karley1118 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Poison the bastard >:D
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:iconubersquish39:
ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:nuu: goodness gracious, the CHOICES! i'll have to sleep on this one :/
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't you mean "I'll have to sleep WITH this one?" Only way to find out what one is better is through sex. xDD

I kid...
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD i'd be scared out of my mind to get that close to Belarus... so i guess my choice would have to be to not kill Hungary... xD
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm going to go with Hungary, Even if it makes me a Trophy Wife. Sorry, but I ain't no murderer. I'm afraid if I Poison Hungary I'll go to jail FOREEEVEEER. Dx
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD

he's kind of a prat, but i think it'd be more trouble than it's worth to try and off him, just to get back with Belarus... *not scared of jail, just too lazy to go through with actually killing Hungary* xD
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It isn't worth it, 'you' chose Hungary, so you have to stick with him. Don't kill him, just effin break up with him. It isn't difficult.
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:iconubersquish39:
ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
exactly!
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PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xP
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Dreams2much Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist
Go marry Prussia instead. XDD
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GameLovingFox Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude if they were BOTH bastards then they BOTH get lost xD
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Kyragirl67 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Put the drink down!
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LibranAngel27 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Don't poison it; why do it for a guy that left you in the dirt? Be the better person and give them both the middle finger! xD
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Alijniaal Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Put le poison in le drink~ :iconevilbelarusplz:
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pistachio-macaroons Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student Writer
POISON HIM! POISON HIM! FINISH HIM OFF AND LET HIM DIE! -evil laugh-
Great as always!
... Yeah, now I feel like drawing Nikolai in a suit :meow:
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Sabby0007 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
put the poison in the drink. c:<
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