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You could feel the heat radiating off your cheeks, as you tried to keep up with the beat of the song that you were listening to. Your breath came out in short, heavy pants, but you still pushed yourself, tried to keep on going.
Because, if you didn't, you knew-
"[Name]! Don't slack! Keep on going!"

Yes. THAT would happen.

You turned around to see your German boyfriend jogging right behind you.
W-wait...wasn't he JUST in front of me? And why is he JOGGING, yet...faster than me?

Not being able to form coherent sentences, you just nodded.
"Just one more lap." He called, as he ran past, ignoring the baleful glares that you sent him behind his back.
Your eyes trailed him, following him across the track, until he came to a stop. Grabbing the nearest bottle of water, he drunk some and then poured some on to his face. The hair that he meticulously kept slicked back was falling on his face now, and you gritted your teeth.

Glancing quickly behind you, you noticed Kiku prodding Feliciano to keep on running. You sometimes wondered why you even trained with Ludwig. Sure, he was your boyfriend and all...but this sort of training was absolutely not worth it!
The way of training, that is. Not your relationship with Ludwig.

Almost half the track lay in front of you, but you just couldn't take it any longer. Slowing down to a walk, you breathed deeply, trying to regain you breath. You noticed Ludwig up ahead, as he used the hem of his shirt to wipe the sweat off his face, giving you a glimpse of his perfect six-pack in the process.

Why did he have to be so damn perfect?

By now, regaining your breath, as you walked up behind him, Ludwig turned around, and observed you, walking up like you were out on an evening stroll.
"[Name]..." he started. "...did you run the last lap?"
"Nope." You replied, smiling. It was time to make him as mad as he'd been making you for the last few minutes.
He sighed, and ran his hand through this hair in a vain effort to slick it back. "[Name]...I thought I'd told you this – if you don't listen to me, then how can I set an example for the rest?"
You shrugged. "Damn, Ludwig, I swear I'm like, half-dead!"
"Well, next time, two extra laps." He replied, becoming serious all of a sudden. You could hear Feliciano whining from behind you, and Kiku muttering something.
Oh, so this was the case...

Waiting till you were sure that Kiku and Feliciano were within hearing range, you exclaimed as loudly as you could, and then walked off.

"Ludwig  - just you be expecting anything from me tonight!"

Cue a confused Italian, a surprised Japanese and a very embarrassed German.
I swear, my mum's like, a slave driver in the gym
What would Ludwig be like? Dx

I told myself that I wouldn't write anything until atleast got Good Things Don't Last Forever finished, but...I really can't keep my word
Something short, and...well, funny, I hope. :S

EDIT: LOLWHUT. I need a Beta Reader. I can never read my own writing, until, like, a few hours after I've finished. So many freaking syntax and grammar errors
Hetalia (c) - :iconyay-aph-plzes:
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Shyboy2641 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehehehehehehe..............Did I actually do anything like ...that...?
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AliciaParkersons Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Hell motherfucking yes! Tell that bitch off!
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A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhhh I love this! It's hilarious! I actually just went through and read a lot of your stuff-- really amazing!

I know this is late but are you still looking for an editor/beta?
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Pffffffffffftahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The last part made my day!!!!
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boo2466 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is someting I would say. Lol. Girls got some guts! xD
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Angelgem Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
lol
that last line i think blew germanys brains to hell
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It probably did xD
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would totally say that! :XD:
Star, nny, this is epic!
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
TARDIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....WOOHOOO!!!
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Which Doctor is your favorite?
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The Eleventh is awesomely and fabulous, but I'd have to say the Ninth. You?
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The Tenth and Ninth ^^ I have a hard time choosing between the two!! The Tenth is so adorkable and I just love the ninth in all his awesomeness
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bitchin'! Favorite episode?
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O Um Oh boy.....The first episode with the tenth doctor. The Christmas invasion! The killer Christmas tree and Santas and I about died laughing when the Doctor quoted Lion King. Had to stop the episode so I could finish laughing and not miss anything.
You?
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LJDLASKDJALKJ I'm so glad you like it!!
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xXNoraMarieXx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do! This is awesome!
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mikuruchan20210 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Pppppbbbffffttttt!!!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, glad you liked it!
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mikuruchan20210 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's funny!
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ninjagirl140 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i love it.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks heaps!!
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ninjagirl140 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome.
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JHO14 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student General Artist
surprised japan? ill think it'll be a japan dieing of blood loss from a nosebleed
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, that comes next :lmao:
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JHO14 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Student General Artist
true...
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LittleDhampir13 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Student Artist
I'm loving the story. plz write more :3
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, well, it's supposed to be a one-shot, but, I'll try OuO
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XxXBuri-ChanXxX Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
FFFFFFFFFFFF---

is it sad that i would have TOTALLY responded in that exact same way? XDDDDDD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Not at all.
That IS what I'd do, anyway.
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xXPharaohKissesXx Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
HAHAHAAH EPIC WIN ENDING!!!! :D

Trouble is, I'd take one look at his face and abs that night and totaaaaallly forget I said that..... :D:D:D :icongermanyfacepalmplz:

Awesome job again!! I love your writing style- it flows perfectly and is interesting to read!! ^___^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
HAHAHAHA.
Oh, yes, I bet I would too.
But...well, at least I'd have said it!!

Aww, thank you so much!! It means quite a bit to me!!!
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ShortieFish Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Niiiiice. XD

Oh, and I can be your beta reader/editor if you like. I edit for one other person, too. I'd be happy to check your grammar and read over things before you submit them.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thankee badass bass player :XD: Yes...I will call you that, sometimes :P

:squee: That'd be amazing!! Thanks so much!!!
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ShortieFish Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL XD

Yeah, just note me the stories and I'll go over and edit a bit before I send them back to you for posting c:
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I would have died. No, literally. My end result in a runningtest (called the Shuttle run test, AARGH) in the last year of highschool was only 2 laps because they changed the freaking beeps.
So after two laps this was me: "Need.. water... and.. air! *sits down* SCREW THIS."

Not even Switzerland could force me to run, not even if he threatens to shoot me.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I try, but then near the middle, I'm just like "F*ck this shit." And I walk off.
I'd be MORE than dead. I only exercise with my mum, really.

HAHAHAHA..o-okay, if he did THAT, I might run. For a minute. That's about it.
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Emurelle Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I was capable of getting five laps but the idiots changed the frikkin tape.

No, not even Switzerland could get me to move. Russia maybe. Or Belarus.
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Fairy-anime Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Pay backs a bitch, ain't it, Luddy? xD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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Loraluna Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
That was amusing~ X3
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks!!!
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zombiekilla21 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
the ending lol
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it!!!
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Mirouqu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist
~~!!!! your stories are the best!!!!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
AJHFAKSJFHAKJ
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T-Thank you so much!! That means so much to me!!
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Mirouqu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist
Uwaa~!!!! Really?!?! :'D
Youre quite welcome btw ^^~
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ERbear26 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hahahahahahahahaha.... perfect ending ^^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much!!
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TheHetaliaOtaku Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The ending is hilarious!~
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