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Ludwig looked at the list in disbelief. "This...I can't do this!"
"Do you want the girl, or not?" Gilbert replied, almost instantaneously.
"...Ja."He replied, after a pause. "But...are you sure that this will work?"
Gilbert laughed. "Oh, don'tcha worry, West! Feliciano and I spent ages on this list! It's foolproof!" Ludwig bit back his comment about how this list was made by people whom he could consider 'fools' just in time.
Involuntarily clearing his throat, he looked at the list that he was holding. His brother's messy handwriting was scrawled all over a page, and there seemed to be...doodles made by Feliciano all around the edge of the paper.

How to get the girl of your dreams
By the awesome Gilbert Beilschmidt.
And some help from Feliciano Vargas

*Make an impression.
*Look Good.
*Be her friend
*Speak to her.
*Compliment her.
*Make her laugh.
*Break the touch barrier.

"B-Break the…touch barrier? But, brud-" Ludwig started, but his brother interrupted him soon enough.
"Shut up, and continue reading, West."
Ludwig continued to read. The list seemed to be getting more horrifying by the second.

Be romantic.
Flirt.
Ask her out.


"Bruder, this is..." Ludwig couldn't find the right words to express his feelings. As it was, he wasn't the best at it, yet...with [Name]? It could only get so much worse, right?
Gilbert laughed, ruffling his brother's hair – something which he knew irked his brother. "Aw, West! Don't worry! I have faith in you – I've brought you up well, after all!"
"Ja, you have..." Ludwig gulped.

"Plus, it's now or never, right?"
Welp. I have started yet another series.
I just think it's time for some Germany love, 'tis all.
Most of these will be short fics, one for each step.

And, yet, I have plans for a Romano series, and maybe even a Greece one
Too much to do, to little time.

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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
SWEETNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS SO COOL!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :'D
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yep!
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:iconloveliebamor6:
LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist
I'm surprised he hasn't gotten an instruction manual already. XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This IS his instruction manual xD
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:iconloveliebamor6:
LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist
Yeah, pretty much.
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ShadowWing15 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
break the touch barrier? does that mean like, holding hands or something?
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, something like that. Or just that comforting hand on the shoulder. Or whatever xD
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:iconshadowwing15:
ShadowWing15 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student General Artist
ah, got it now
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ArashiNoShinzo Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww poor Germany XD At least he has an awesome big brother like Prussia right?
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, yeah!
Though, I don't know quite HOW much of help Prussia would be :P
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:iconarashinoshinzo:
ArashiNoShinzo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, we all know how Prussia can be XD
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sisaridu Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
next!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LKAJFLAKJ
:D
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sisaridu Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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:iconwolfntigger:
WOLFnTIGGER Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist
I cant wait for the next part
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:icondummydanceplz:
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:iconwolfntigger:
WOLFnTIGGER Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist
lol
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Do more! :3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:icondummydanceplz:
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
:iconwthplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ssh. Don't question awesomeness xD
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
LOL OK xD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:lmao:
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:iconlivpc:
LivPC Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
LOL *laughs too*
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
ignore that last comment on the Prussia story. i'm too dumb to read through my whole inbox before asking things xD

this is going to be awesome! :iconlawooplz:

how do you manage so many series' at once? D:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I-I...don't know D:
I just get this idea, and I HAVE to write out SOMETHING, at least!! Or else, I forget :S
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
i know what you mean (suddenly)

we were listening to the radio at work yesterday and all these songs were reminding me of characters... good gravy the ideas!

i was up til midnight last night writing a Canada story, and i have no idea if it's even good :/
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Banditgirl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Germany! since when has Prussia EVER given you good advice!?

although the list does seem pretty well thought out.. WHAT WITCHCRAFT IS THIS?!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's what happens when Feli and Gil work together
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lunalovesalxesander Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
come on ^^
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlawooplz:
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AnnaMay15 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh yes! :iconyaygermanyplz:
I find this prompt awesome and funny. It's already bad enough I my bff and I joke about Germany having really intricate steps for everything (even relaxing) so Prussia and Italy making him a check off list to ask the Reader out makes me LOL and fangirl so much.
Can't wait for the 'Break The Touch Barrier' haha Germany you shy dork you. :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I found this website with all of these, all of a sudden, and I was like "OH GOSH YES THIS IS MADE FOR GERMANY!"

Neither can I, to be honest xD
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AnnaMay15 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
GAH late reply is late ^^;
Aha I think I've seen that site! My friend linked it to me, and said the same thins :lol: It's totally Germany's homepage. xD
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LadyAuth Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes I love your stories and I am so very excited to read this one!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LAKFJALJF
T-Thank you so much! You're too kind!
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HannajimaShields Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
this is definatly going to be a great story
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ALKFJAFKJ
I'm so glad that you have confidence in me :'D
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shadowthecat971 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like where this is going
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks so much! Glad you do!
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Anime-Freak-14 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
*squeals* OMGITSOUNDSSOCUTEEEEEE!!!!! XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks heaps!
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Anime-Freak-14 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
:D You're welcome!
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chocolatesock Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
aww, this sounds really cute~!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Danke!
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Lespecialie Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
This is gonna be good, lol!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, I'm glad you think so!
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sanemadness7 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
aw Ludwig, so shy its just too cute :)
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