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"I never thought circuses could be so interesting, Ludwig," [Name] smiled wider, as she wrapped her coat around herself tighter. Ludwig glanced towards her, a smile on his face mirroring hers, as the tips of their noses were bright red, from the cold.
"I'm glad you liked it," Ludwig ran his gloved hand through his hair, getting used to the strange pain in the cheekbones that comes from smiling for prolonged times. "Ehm, [Name]...is this coffee place really far? Maybe we should've just taken the car."
"Oh, it's not that far," she shook her head. "Just down the road, really...I think it seems longer because of the cold...oh, you're not cold, are you?"
Ludwig shook his head, and [Name] continued. "Yes, well, I thought that I should kind of show you my thanks, and the bakery beside it has some really nice stuff, too."
"You didn't need to show me your thanks, [Name]," Ludwig chuckled briefly.
"Oh, but I do!" [Name] shook her head. "Plus, the coffee here is nice, anyway. You like coffee, don't you?"
Ludwig nodded, as [Name], all of a sudden, came to a stop in front of a quaint awning.
"There...was a coffee shop here?"
"You didn't know that?" [Name]'s eyes sparkled, as she laughed. "But then again, I don't blame you, not many people know about it, anyway."

Ludwig couldn't help but smile faintly, at [Name]'s enthusiasm, cheerfulness, concern...he wondered if ever he'd have the chance to tell her how he really felt about her. He didn't want to spoil how the relationship had been so far – it was strangely calming, and wonderful, and...terribly hard to explain, but-
"Ludwig...are you okay?"
"Oh, I, erm...y-you have something, there." Ludwig pointed at her cheek, where an eyelash sat astray, as a matter of distraction.
"Hmm? Really?" [Name] touched her cheek.
"No…more to the right."
"Here?"
"No, uhh..." Ludwig paused, before he pointed at the approximate spot on his own cheek, yet [Name] still missed the eyelash by just a bit. Almost, as if by reflex, Ludwig reached out, to brush away the eyelash. As his fingers came into contact with her cold cheek, Ludwig froze, slightly. [Name] seemed to freeze as well, as she looked up at him, waiting for a reaction.

"Your...uhm, your cheek...it's quite cold." Ludwig drew his hand back, the tips of his fingers tingling. [Name] rubbed her cheek in a vain effort to hide her blush, a shy smile on her face. "Yeah...I think I just need some coffee."

Step 7 - Break the touch barrier - complete
I'll be a bit upset when this series is over. Dear, darling Ludwig :heart:

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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Adorable ^w^
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
well for you ludwig, that was close enough for step 7
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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:iconorion-pax-117:
Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
mwhahahahahahahahaha
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:iconguineapiggy202:
guineapiggy202 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have writer's block and artist's block like right now. My brain is dead xD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, I'm sorry about it.
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guineapiggy202 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nawwww it's okay :D
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miroku13579 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love this story hurry with the next chapter!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it :D
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:iconlilredsand:
lilredsand Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY ARE YOU MAKEING ME WAIT!! THIS IS THE BEST I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, I'm sorry! I'll be working on it!
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TheBlackWolf07 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Artist
so far really good. ^_^ and writer's block sucks
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you!
Indeed :T
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:icontheblackwolf07:
TheBlackWolf07 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Artist
LOL. i hate when writer's block pops up then i dance or watch youtube vids XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, I wish that worked for me.
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
yes, I will be very upset when this series is over. I like how this is nice and slow, not like some fanfic where it's meet, love, and sex....:bleh: I want things like this more often because they're closer to real life. Great Job!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, that's what I was aiming for :'D
Thanks!!
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KeliLindsey Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I feel like I waited forever for this chapter! <3 It felt much to short, though... only because I love this story. :3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
QAQ I'M SO SORRY!
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KeliLindsey Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay! I used to write fanfiction, and I hated when people rushed me! haha! This story makes me happy. :D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, you're too kind! Thanks so much!
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awesomesauce9001 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
This is so cute~!! <3 *Faints from adorableness XD*
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks!
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LittleFlutist4 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
>///< speechless
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, I hope in a good way QAQ
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:iconlittleflutist4:
LittleFlutist4 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
it is
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:iconllabomination:
Llabomination Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SO CUTE
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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MiniYouko Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
O////O
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm working on itttt!
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:iconminiyouko:
MiniYouko Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
>w< :iconcuteheartplz:
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yangchan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist
This series has always left me in a fit of giggles. Germany is being cute and remaining in character. Its great! I really don't want it to end, but I want it to end!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much! That's such a nice compliment!!!
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merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
how did i enjoy the circus?!?! :iconblasphemyplz: i hate clowns!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sssh, artistic licence, m'dear.
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:iconmerlinsayshi:
merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
hmmmph.
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i don't want this series to end either... another awesome, heartwarming chapter, as always :D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww QAQ i'm getting emotional over a chapter!
Thanks so much!
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:iconnine-blackbirds:
Nine-Blackbirds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
YOU.
YOU AND YOUR AMAZING CUTENESS LEVELS.
DAMN YOU XD.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
//forever damned
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:iconblu-dog-neko:
blu-dog-neko Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
OHMYGAWD I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW CUTE THIS IS!! >W<
<333
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks!!
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blu-dog-neko Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
:D
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:iconemo-kaylah:
Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Awesome like always ^^
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youuuu!
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Emo-Kaylah Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
your welcome~!
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist
Gilbert (and Feliciano) should have made a 20 steps list! XD
This chapter was so sweet! :heart:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
GAHAHAHAHA I'm thinking they really should've!
Thanks so much!
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elphieofkiamoko Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
>w< I totally squeed when I saw this in my inbox.

D8 ONLY 3 PARTS LEFT?!?!?! NOOOOOOO!!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, I'm glad you did!
Thank youuuuu!

//also sad
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