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"I never thought circuses could be so interesting, Ludwig," [Name] smiled wider, as she wrapped her coat around herself tighter. Ludwig glanced towards her, a smile on his face mirroring hers, as the tips of their noses were bright red, from the cold.
"I'm glad you liked it," Ludwig ran his gloved hand through his hair, getting used to the strange pain in the cheekbones that comes from smiling for prolonged times. "Ehm, [Name]...is this coffee place really far? Maybe we should've just taken the car."
"Oh, it's not that far," she shook her head. "Just down the road, really...I think it seems longer because of the cold...oh, you're not cold, are you?"
Ludwig shook his head, and [Name] continued. "Yes, well, I thought that I should kind of show you my thanks, and the bakery beside it has some really nice stuff, too."
"You didn't need to show me your thanks, [Name]," Ludwig chuckled briefly.
"Oh, but I do!" [Name] shook her head. "Plus, the coffee here is nice, anyway. You like coffee, don't you?"
Ludwig nodded, as [Name], all of a sudden, came to a stop in front of a quaint awning.
"There...was a coffee shop here?"
"You didn't know that?" [Name]'s eyes sparkled, as she laughed. "But then again, I don't blame you, not many people know about it, anyway."

Ludwig couldn't help but smile faintly, at [Name]'s enthusiasm, cheerfulness, concern...he wondered if ever he'd have the chance to tell her how he really felt about her. He didn't want to spoil how the relationship had been so far – it was strangely calming, and wonderful, and...terribly hard to explain, but-
"Ludwig...are you okay?"
"Oh, I, erm...y-you have something, there." Ludwig pointed at her cheek, where an eyelash sat astray, as a matter of distraction.
"Hmm? Really?" [Name] touched her cheek.
"No…more to the right."
"Here?"
"No, uhh..." Ludwig paused, before he pointed at the approximate spot on his own cheek, yet [Name] still missed the eyelash by just a bit. Almost, as if by reflex, Ludwig reached out, to brush away the eyelash. As his fingers came into contact with her cold cheek, Ludwig froze, slightly. [Name] seemed to freeze as well, as she looked up at him, waiting for a reaction.

"Your...uhm, your cheek...it's quite cold." Ludwig drew his hand back, the tips of his fingers tingling. [Name] rubbed her cheek in a vain effort to hide her blush, a shy smile on her face. "Yeah...I think I just need some coffee."

Step 7 - Break the touch barrier - complete
I'll be a bit upset when this series is over. Dear, darling Ludwig :heart:

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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Adorable ^w^
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
well for you ludwig, that was close enough for step 7
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xD
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
mwhahahahahahahahaha
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guineapiggy202 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have writer's block and artist's block like right now. My brain is dead xD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, I'm sorry about it.
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:iconguineapiggy202:
guineapiggy202 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nawwww it's okay :D
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miroku13579 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student
I love this story hurry with the next chapter!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it :D
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lilredsand Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY ARE YOU MAKEING ME WAIT!! THIS IS THE BEST I CANT WAIT FOR YOUR AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!
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