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The meetings at the pub had become more frequent, and Ludwig and [Name] seemed to be getting closer. Even Gilbert seemed to concur that.
"Which step are you on, Ludwig?" He asked, all of a sudden, over breakfast.
"Step? I don't know what-"
"The Ten Steps."
"Ah." Ludwig gulped. "Ahh...five, I think."
"Gilbert laughed in his usual, raucous manner. "Man, if I were you, I'd totally ask her out, now! I'd bring her back home, cook for her, and then maybe-"
"Danke, but I think I shall stick to the plan." Ludwig hastily interrupted his brother. He couldn't think of doing that to [Name]...
"And that's why you're my little bruder." Gilbert chuckled, as he ruffled Ludwig's hair.
"Bruder...I'd just combed my hair."
"Try the bed head one day."
"Nein."

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~  
"So...Ludwig, tell me."
"Hmm?" He turned in response to his name, to the girl sitting beside him.
"Do you even have to go to the gym?"
"Do I-"
"Or do you just get your workout by taking care of three dogs?" [Name] laughed, as she leant back on the park bench, stretching slightly.
Ludwig chuckled softly. "It can be quite an ordeal...but I think it is worth it."
[Name] nodded. "You're right. There's some...strange sort of...happy feeling, that you get from animals. They're so much more...dependable, aren't they?"
Ludwig was tempted to ask why she thought that, but he decided it could wait for later. Aster seemed to have had enough of games and running around, and had come and settled snugly against [Name]'s legs. It was...a sort of sweet sight.

My dogs seem to like you, [Name]," he smiled, as Berlitz brought his Frisbee up to [Name], for her to throw it once more.
She laughed, making his hear beat faster suddenly once more. "They're just nice dogs, that's all."
"Nein." he shook his head. "They don't get along with just anyone."
"Is this supposed to be an off-hand compliment, Ludwig?" [Name] smirked.

Was it? Ludwig thought.

"Because, if it is, thank you."
Well...that was not as hard as I thought it would be.

Step 5 - Compliment her - achieved
Uwahh! Short, and sweet! Short, and sweet!
I hope!


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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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:iconorion-pax-117:
Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:w00t:
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
hahaha
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LoveLiebAmor6 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist
Sorry, Luddy, that doesn't really count. But okay.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL xD
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
UWAH! I love compliments like these.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aren't they just the best? xD
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Yep. :)
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Vixy-hedgie2 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
damn these are far too good to NOT be contuniued >.<
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm restarting them soon ^^
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PandaBear0503 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NOOOOOOOOOO I NEEEED MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Six would be up soon :)
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GrayWolf92 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
awwww y no six im in love with this please... take ur time but not a year please
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Six would be up soon :)
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HolyVimto22 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
Ahh, moar! o:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
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Working on it :heart:
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austriababy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HURRY! I NEED 6!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :eager:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In the works xD
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AMAZING
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
Doggy!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ksdjahkd cute xD
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merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
cute? i just lub dogs!
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deidaraawesomeness Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
d'aww! :'D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gotta love them dogs xD
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deidaraawesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahah yeah XD
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconattackglompplz: ASDFGDLFGJOMGILOVEGERMANY'SDOGS!
awesome chapter, as always :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
AKJSHDAKJSDHAKJSDHAMETOOOOOO!
Thank you!! :heart:
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:D you're quite welcome, as always~!
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Yayness!
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:iconcheerplz:
THank you!
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WOLFnTIGGER Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist
cant wait for 6~~ <3 <3
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:hug:
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WOLFnTIGGER Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist
lol I lvoe ur profile pic XDDD hey you should write a netherlands fic :3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahahaha, thank you!
I really should!!
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XDD np and netherlands is jsut so awesome I wanna glomp him,...but he might stab me if I do x.x
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florwering Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awww~ and he didn't even know it~ how cute~
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He's getting better :clap:
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florwering Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
he is :D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gilbert is proud of him :'D
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florwering Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... and feli XD
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Aww!! :heart:
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:iconluvluvplz:
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Achieving without realizing it xD
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Like a boss xDD
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When i think of :iconsexygermanyplz:'s sexy voice and abs, i just......:iconblushplz:
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Pfft= me too xD
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lols ........ Step 5 - Compliment her - achieved
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:squee:
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