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"I'm really glad you showed up, Ludwig!" [Name] said, laughing, as she came up to Ludwig. Ludwig felt compelled to return at least half a smile – she looked such a sight, in a formal cut dress, that just went to below her knees. Ludwig tried his hardest not to gaze at her legs, and succeeded…mostly.
"It's for a good cause, after all." He replied politely, as he shook her hand.
"Oh, that's right!" She exclaimed, all of a sudden. "We did meet at a pet store, so I wanted to ask...do you have any pets?"

He nodded, in reply. "Three dogs."
"Three dogs?" Her eyes seemed to light up with joy. "What are their names?"
"Uh...Blackie, Berlitz a-and Aster." He looked away from her, all of a sudden, hoping that she had not noticed his slight stutter. He had many topics in mind, on what she could talk about – polite chatter and such, but...his dogs? He was absolutely unprepared for that!

She squeezed her eyes shut, momentarily, and opened them again. "That's so cute, Ludwig! I sort of did imagine you to be a dog person, I guess! I just couldn't ever, for the life of me, imagine you to be a bird person! You've never had any pet birds, have you?"
Ludwig couldn't help but chuckle, as he shook his head.
"See? I thought so!" Her lopsided smile made Ludwig momentarily forget what he was going to say, but thankfully, [Name] continued to speak.
"Yeah, I just can't imagine you with birds. I kind of always associate birds with pirates, really, and I could NEVER imagine you to be a pirate?"

Ludwig was partially amazed at [Name]'s ability to skip topic so frequently – it took him a while to connect her chain of thought, but that only meant that there was never a dull moment with her around.
"Why could I not be a pirate?"
She seemed to think for a while, before replying. "Well...you'd probably have a panic attack if you didn't have access to a shower!" She burst out laughing, but covered her mouth soon enough, trying to control her laughter (and her blush, considering where her thought actually led her).
Ludwig chuckled, slightly puzzled, but her honesty and frankness made him like her even more.

"Let me get you a drink, okay?" She held up her index finger for a moment, then almost ran off, at full speed, leaving Ludwig just standing there, alone.

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~

Her face seemed unusually hot, as she put her hand to her cheeks.
"What have I been blabbing away, in front of Ludwig?" She murmured out loud to herself. He was an extremely attractive man, and knowing that there was much more to him than just looks, she faintly realised just how attractive she found this man.
"I can't be hasty, though," she told herself. "Friends first, then whatever."

~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~

" I actually forgot to ask you what you wanted, so I got you the same type of beer as you were having at the pub...I hope that's okay." [Name] smiled sheepishly, as she handed him an opened bottle of lager. With an unusually large smile, he took the bottle of lager, thanking her.
"I'm surprised you remember." He said, sipping his beer, and finding that, to his surprise that it really was like his favourite, if not the absolute same.
"A good sense of beer, then" he concluded to himself, not being to help admire [Name] all the more.
She laughed lightly. "Well...I'll have to remember now that we're friends... we're friends now, aren't we?" She tried to cover up what she'd blurted out.
Oh my gosh, there go my chances of knowing such an amazing man! Gosh, ehy must I ramble so much? Did I really have to say friends? I bet he's insecure with relationships and - oh my gosh, did I just say relationship? I've just ruined-"

"I guess we are."

Step 3 - Be a friend - achieved
Ohai, guys. I'm too sleepy to write anything substantial here

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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Cute ending ^w^
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skittles-and-hetalia Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Student General Artist
why can't i keep my mouth shut :iconsadfaceplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
u.u //patpat
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i have no comment right now........................ in schock mode unfortunitly
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL xD
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:iconorion-pax-117:
Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ikr?
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
:) Teehee, this me is so like me that it's hilarious. If this is the way I can get a guy like Germany, then SIGN ME UP!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
//hands you form
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
Thanks. *signs form*
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now your soul is mine.
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
hey.............you didn't put that in the contract.
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
hey.............you didn't put that in the contract.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you didn't read le contract properly =w=b
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Ohmygeezgermany Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would gladly trade my soul. XD
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
yeah I did. you didn't let me read the fine print.
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Mecha-Woman Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS AWESOME!!!! Teehee that skipping topics is so me, I couldn't help but giggle the whole time I read this
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's something a lot of us do!
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pikachutail Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
"I bet he's insecure with relationships and - oh my gosh, did I just say relationship?"
LOL!!!!!!!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you like it :'D
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist
Poor girl! XD" You'd probably have a panic attack if you didn't have access to a shower!" -My favourite line! :D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well...he would, wouldn't he? XD
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MiniYouko Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Everytime I read updates for this fic I end up giggling like... I don't even know what XDD
Please continue! <3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks so much!!
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:iconmerlinsayshi:
merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
0.o I was just at the pet store are you a stalker? XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome skills, bro B)
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:iconmerlinsayshi:
merlinsayshi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
hmmm, i see. i'll just have to run then! you'll never catch me!
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:iconzombiekilla21:
zombiekilla21 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
i would just have a series of awkward silences i only talk like that with my derp friends
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Pffft xD
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:iconchocolateroyalcookie:
chocolateroyalcookie Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
are you stalking me~? : D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOL!
I would say that this is the first reader insert I've written that could be based on me xDDD
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purplexninjaxdragon Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It seems the reader has severe ADD...are you stalking me?!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, nothing of that sort!
If I were being honest, she sort of reminds me of myself, now that I think about it xDD
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purplexninjaxdragon Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XDD
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AmbreAnna13 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty much how I am with Germany guys. Mission Complete ;D
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
PFFFFT- you should see ME in front of my crush xDD
Who sadly, bears resemblance to Ludwig...
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FantasyFanatic-M Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The babbling...
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Oh gosh. xD
I just imagined my sister in the reader's position. She is exactly like that. :heart:
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HAHA, is she my long lost twin? :'D
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Zea900 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Student Writer
LOL Sadly, I talk like this in front of boys. Yeah, I don't shut up.

Although I do no have a lopsided smile...

This is amazingly cute! Can't wait for the next bit! :)
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Uwahh! Me too! I'm a MESS in front of my crush!

I shouldn't have added that sjhdlslhskKsj Personal traits are not good in reader-inserts...

Thank you so, SO MUCH!!!
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elphieofkiamoko Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
o_o *totally has a lopsided smile* WHY ARE YOU STALKING ME?!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, we're just mor alike than we thought xDD
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hellohello2234 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I talk like that too! I will be talking about something and randomly exclaim 'Oh!' and change the subject.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconepichighfiveplz:
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:iconhellohello2234:
hellohello2234 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I blame it on my ADD.
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:iconthevampirerose:
TheVampireRose Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
sad thing is... this is how I talk...

Next step: get him alone...:iconyesvictoryplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LMAOOOOO! That'd be funny :'D
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PelliFeathers Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
'Cheevs. *fistpump* Wait, what am I doing here? I thought I was rummaging through my closet for something.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XDD
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:iconchocolatesock:
chocolatesock Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO ATTRACTIVE, LUDWIG?! :iconfinallyplz:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know, right? xD
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