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Ludwig glanced nervously towards his brother and closest friend, before looking back towards who would become "the main goal of tonight", as his brother put it. Loosening the knot of his tie, slightly, he made his way towards the girl who was laughing with abandon, the girl whose eyes were sparkling with laughter, the girl whose mere gesture could make his heart feel all funny...
...he really had been around Feliciano too much, he concluded.

Clearing his throat in preparation for his introduction to [Name], he was caught completely off guard when she turned around, the smile on her face growing wider when she saw him.
"Ludwig!" She exclaimed. "What a pleasant surprise! It's nice to see you here!"
"Uh...ja..." was all he managed to say.

"It sure is...a surprise, seeing you not working, and in a place like this!"
"I hope it's a good surprise." Ludwig found himself replying, before he realised that it was absolutely wrong for him to say that, and that I might hurt his chances with [Name] to an extent of 2.8%.
"Oh, of course it is!" She chimed in reply, smiling beatifically towards him. He couldn't help but smile back, softly, in return.
"So...are you here with someone, or..." [Name] left the words hanging.
"Ah, no, I am here alone...and you?" he wasn't sure whether he was being impertinent or not, but he just had to know.
"Oh, no. I often come here. I love this pub, really. It's a cosy place, don't you think?"
Ludwig looked around the pub. It really had been done up in a non-pretentious, homely manner, like the ones he had seen on a trip to England. The low leel of formality made him feely more comfortable, yet uncomfortable. He didn't see a single person there wearing formal trousers, a button up shirt and a tie, either.

"Hey, Ludwig...you okay?" [Name]'s voice was soft, yet it still made him jump.
"Oh, ja." He whispered, almost in a breath.
"Good." She leant back, a smile playing on her lips. "You looked a bit worried there."
Ludwig was about to say something, but she continued to speak.
"Which wouldn't have been all that good, really. 'Cause, I mean, you look really good when you smile, Ludwig! You should smile more!"
Ludwig decided that looking at the wall behind [Name]'s head would be a good idea, at this point, as he felt his cheeks heat up.

"I'm actually quite impressed with your choice, Ludwig. I never thought of you to be the type to actually enter a pub!" she spoke, after a pause, making Ludwig look back at her. There was a lot that he could say, at that point, but there was only one thing he could say, at that point.
"Do you want a drink?"

Step 1 - Make an impression - achieved
Sometimes, Ludwig's capacity of cuteness kills me...
Haven't managed to proofread this OTL, but...I'm really sleepy, for some reason...
At least I have a new pair of Vans.

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BrodoSwagins Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Before I read any more I just wanted to applaud you on this.
I love it.
A lot.
You've done his character perfectly and just ohmygoodness.
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
Love it ^w^
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGG Germany likes MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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skittles-and-hetalia Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconclapplz: bravo may good writer :D
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :'D
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
LOL LUDWIG! yes you have now completed the first stage! good for you!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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:iconorion-pax-117:
Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
His capacity for cuteness always kills me.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THIS.
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IXIAmaya-NatsukiIXI Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
Ur rly good at this stuff....I think I might be falling for Germany already.....
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Uwahh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Germany's too amazing, in my opinion, to not all for :'D
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sanemadness7 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
oh ludwig, you should smile more, soooo cute XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know, right? SEE LUDDY, SO MANY OF US WANT YOU TO SMILE MORE!
:icongermanyfacepalmplz:
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sanemadness7 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
luddy lol that made me giggle i honestly dont see ludwig responding to that nickname "luddy luddy luddy luddy ludz ludz ludz! LUDWIG!"-me "WHAT!!??"-ludwig "hi X3"-me ha ha ha.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I would FORCE him to :evillaugh:
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sanemadness7 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
"i can always make you smile ludwig" lol
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ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconilavplz:words can not describe how adorable that was...
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LAKFJALFKJSDG
Your comment's enough for me :'D
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:iconubersquish39:
ubersquish39 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
aww shucks... :iconblushplz:
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist
Aww! Ludwig is so cute when he's trying to find his words! XD :heart:
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Isn't he always cute? *shot*
Naw, I get what you mean!
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iulisasuke Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist
Hehe! :D
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LizDIXVIII Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student General Artist
lol XD
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconlizdixviii:
LizDIXVIII Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student General Artist
hahaha

so... how are you?
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:iconminiyouko:
MiniYouko Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
XD Step 1 achieved
Go Luddy go!
So freakin cute X3
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Someone get some cheerleaders for him, lol!
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:iconminiyouko:
MiniYouko Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
XDDD
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ShadowWing15 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
cute, cute, and more cute! why must he be so damn adoreable!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I have no clue...I wish I knew myself :'D
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elphieofkiamoko Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this story already. Luddy isIt's so cute. >w<
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pahaha, I understand you ;p
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Midori-San998 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
One step down, 9 more to go.
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
YOU CAN DO IT, LUDWIG! :iconcheerplz:
Ludwig - :icongermanyfacepalmplz:
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Zea900 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Writer
Haha, not a very big fan of Germany, but I'm reading this. Just 'cause you wrote it.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Y-You aren't?
I shouldn't be THAT shocked. I mean...there have to be some out there, r-right?
B-BUT YOU ARE?
LKAFJLAKJFALKGJALGJALG
:iconhappytearsplz:
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:iconzea900:
Zea900 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student Writer
o.o ...okay, maybe I'm starting to think I should've kept my mouth shut. I-I mean, I don't hate him! No, no, nothing like that! I just...love others more than him...?

:icongermanyfacepalmplz:
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violentluck Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Writer
GO LUDWIG!!! I'm rooting for you Luddy! It is so cute!!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, poor sod needs all the luck he can get :'D
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violentluck Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student Writer
Hehe indeed!
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soulcatchr Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
wow. this is the first really good germanyxreader story ive seen yet, excellent job.
and, yes, he does need to smile more. im surprised italy hasnt rubbed some of his cheerfulness off on him yet.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, t-thanks so much!!
I wouldn't be too surprised, lol. I mean...my cheerfulness hasn't rubbed off on my best friend, either. :|
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soulcatchr Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student General Artist
lol well you can always keep trying!! X3
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HeReIaMRaMbLiNgAgAin Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like reader. she rambles.
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what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
And I ramble, too.
And I bet every girl would in front of him xD
Well...except for me. I just ramble all the time.
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sisaridu Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay! To cute!
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:iconwhat-the-crapola:
what-the-crapola Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Uwahh, thank you!
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sisaridu Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np ^w^
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WOLFnTIGGER Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist
mroe pwease :3
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